Commentary: School Start Times

By Anna Loy

School start times




Photo of tired student by Anna Loy

Comments

  1. I really like how you included scientific facts. You don't see that as often as you should. i love how this is also an issue that I talk about a lot. We really don't get enough sleep and then teachers proceed to tell us that we aren't paying attention, which is not that fair.

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  2. I reallly liked the inclusion of different viewpoints and personal stories. It makes the commentary much more realtable.

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  3. really interesting topic and extremely good evidence to back up your point!!

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  4. This is a very good argument with facts to help back it up! Nice job.

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  5. really good argument! I 100% agree

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  6. Very well written, and very well put together. This is a very interesting topic, especially to teens because we can relate to the problem.

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  7. I really think you did a great job. The arguments are strong and the topic is also very interesting.

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