I really like how you included scientific facts. You don't see that as often as you should. i love how this is also an issue that I talk about a lot. We really don't get enough sleep and then teachers proceed to tell us that we aren't paying attention, which is not that fair.
I really like how you included scientific facts. You don't see that as often as you should. i love how this is also an issue that I talk about a lot. We really don't get enough sleep and then teachers proceed to tell us that we aren't paying attention, which is not that fair.
ReplyDeleteI reallly liked the inclusion of different viewpoints and personal stories. It makes the commentary much more realtable.
ReplyDeletereally interesting topic and extremely good evidence to back up your point!!
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good argument with facts to help back it up! Nice job.
ReplyDeletereally good argument! I 100% agree
ReplyDeleteVery well written, and very well put together. This is a very interesting topic, especially to teens because we can relate to the problem.
ReplyDeleteI really think you did a great job. The arguments are strong and the topic is also very interesting.
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