Story Reflection Cliff Jump

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By Kevin Gochee

My story took place in the beautiful coast town of Costa Brava. My soccer team and I were finishing up our two week long soccer tournament in Spain by enjoying a couple of days on the beach. Cliffs were everywhere and the sky was crystal clear.

Every-time I told my story I changed small details. I was incorporating peer feedback into my story while also searching for different ways to make specific parts more interesting. I ended up focusing on the main scenes in my story and adding lots of detail.

Telling a story to my peers without notecards was interesting. Without cards to hide behind, I was forced to use body gestures to explain my story. Also, it was extra personal when your sharing directly with only one or two people.


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  1. AnonymousMarch 12, 2020 at 8:52 AM

    Good job! very cool how you incorporated peer feedback into your story, and how difficult was doing your story with body gestures?

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